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高考作文—有关五四青年节!

[日期:2018-05-11] 来源:  作者: [字体: ]

假如你是李华,你所在的学校将要举办一场五四青年节庆祝活动。你和你的同学邀请你校的美国交换生Tom参加。请你写一封信给Tom,要点如下:

1.邀请Tom一起表演,一个中西合璧的节目; 

2.活动时间:5月4日下午2:00----5:00; 

3.活动地点:学校学术报告厅。

Dear Tom,

You have told me that you are very interested in how we Chinese celebrate China’s Youth Day .With it approaching, I would like to invite you to join us in the celebration in our school. A variety of activities will be included at the celebration, such as performances and games, which will surely enable you to know better about our culture. To get fully involved, I , together with my classmates, hope that you can put on a performance with us. And I think it will be a good combination of both our culture and yours. By the way, the celebration will take place in the school lecture hall from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm on May 4.

We are looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

LI Hua

点评:这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:

1. 通篇以一般将来时态为主。2 .要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。3. 注意语气。既然该文是一篇邀请函,所以要注意语气应该比较恳切。该文的写作难点在第二条内容上:要邀请汤姆参加五四青年节活动,要写出活动的时间,地点以及邀请他参加的节目。写这部分内容时,学生可以采取简单句和复合句结合的方法。

【范文亮点】

1. 范文采取了非限定性定语从句(A variety of activities will be included at the celebration, such as performances and games, which will surely enable you to know better about our culture. )等句式。

2. 文章采用了would like to; A variety of;are looking forward to等高级单词或短语。

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假定你是学校团委会干部李华。你校决定于“五四青年节”当天举办一系列活动,其中包括英语演讲比赛,希望邀请学校的访问学者Susan担任评委。请根据以下内容给她写一封信。

内容主要包括: 

1、邀请Susan担任评委;

2、简介青年节及活动:

①庆祝时间:每年5月4日

②由来:纪念1919年的青年运动

③今年学校庆祝活动:英语演讲比赛和师生书画摄影作品展

3、英语演讲比赛主题(My Youth My Dream)、时间、地点和参加对象(青年教师和学生)

参考词汇:书法calligraphy

Dear Susan, 

I am writing, on behalf of the Youth League of our school, to invite you to be a judge of our English Speech Contest, which is part of the celebration of Youth Day.

In China, Youth Day is celebrated on May 4th every year in memory of the Youth Movement in 1919. This year our school will hold an English speech contest and an exhibition of the paintings, calligraphy works and photos by the teachers and students. The contest, whose theme is My Youth My Dream, will be held at the stadium from 3 pm. to 5 pm. on May 4 with the participation of all the students and young teachers.

We’d appreciate it if you could come. Looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,          

Li Hua

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Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School, which is close to your university. I’m writing on behalf of our school to invite you to give a lecture on the topic “Achieving Happiness Through Hard Work”. 

The lecture is to be held in our school hall on May 4th as a special event to mark China’s Youth Day. It will start at 2:30 pm and last for about 2 hours, with an audience of about 500 students and teachers alike. We would feel deeply honored if you could accept our invitation and share your inspiring experiences as a distinguished professor.  

I am looking forward to your reply.

Best,

Li Hua

 

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